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I don't have chance about communication with foreigner. Although I well not use Engligh , So very amusing. Also, My teacher is very beautiful. But when first ciass, I am very ugly. because ,I get up lately sleep. But. my teacher tell me "pretty" teacher!! You very kind. Now, I not well English But, After three month, my english ablity is will improve a lot. 


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I don't have chance about communication with foreigner.
I don’t have the chance to communicate with foreigner.
THE can be used with non-count nouns (chance). A is called indefinite article. You only use A with singular count nouns (foreigner).

Although I well not use Engligh , So very amusing.
Although I do not use English, it is very amusing.
Use helping verb “do” to complete the sentence.
Connect two sentences using coordinating conjunction. Add “it’s” as the subject of the second sentence.
When you use ALTHOUGH, it needs an independent clause (it is very amusing).
Although I do not use English, it is very fun.

Also, My teacher is very beautiful.
My teacher is also very beautiful.
Adverbs are placed after the “be verbs”.

But when first class, I am very ugly. because ,I get up lately sleep.
On our first class, I am very ugly because I sleep late
WHEN is a subordinating conjunction. It needs a complete sentence. 
Use preposition (ON) instead. It only needs a phrase.
Connect the two sentences using a coordinating conjunction (because).
Lately means “in the recent past”. The more appropriate adverb should be “LATE” which means “after the expected or usual time”.
On our first class, I was very ugly because I slept late.

But. my teacher tell me "pretty" teacher!!
My teacher told me, “pretty!”
When reporting a verbatim, always use past tense.
My teacher told me that I'm pretty! 

You very kind.
You’re very kind.
Your sentence doesn't have a -be verb. (are in "You are...")

Now, I not well English But, After three month, my english ablity is will improve a lot. 
Now, I’m not good at English, but after three months, my English will improve a lot. 
It has no be verbs. Coordinating conjunctions when used to connect two sentences, comma should be used. English ability is redundant. “Will improve” is already the verb of the sentence. There is no need to add another be verb. 

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