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What do you do to improve your health?



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I work our at a gym twice a week Also

I play badminton too. Every weekends, I play badminton with my sister. Throgh

these, I can build my strength.

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I work our at a gym twice a week Also I play badminton too.
I work out at a gym twice a week and I also play badminton.
I work out at a gym twice a week and I play badminton, too.
Always check your spelling. “Also” and “too” are both used to add an agreeing thought in a sentence. Using them together in the same clause to convey an agreement to the main one will cause redundancy.

Every weekends, I play badminton with my sister.
Every weekend, I play badminton with my sister.
Nouns which follow the determiner “every” should be in the singular form, as “every” is also synonymous with “each”.

Throgh these, I can build my strength.
Through these, I can build my strength.
Always check your spelling.

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