Customer Support Center

1599-9783
Kakao : milgarussem

Correction / Writing


What is happiness for you? (What makes you happy?)



>
Listening to music and Watcing music video make me happy. So I always listen and watch my favorite artist(EXO)'s songs.


-----------------------------------------

* Correction:     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    


Listening to music and Watcing music video make me happy.
So I always listen and watch my favorite artist(EXO)'s songs.

Listening to music and watching music video make me happy, so I always watch and listen to my favorite artist (EXO)'s songs.

Be careful with your spelling and proper capitalization of words. You only capitalize proper nouns, the pronoun I, and the beginning of a sentence.
Pattern: Independent clause, conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) dependent clause.
"Listen to" is a fixed expression. Please put this after the verb "watch" as it comes with a preposition. 

KakaoTalk Channel 1:1 Chat Button