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Are digital photographs too plentiful to be meaningful?



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We are living on 'digital world', which most of machines are based on digital technology rather than 'analog'.

Digital technology has changed totally our life   and the camera is also one of trendy product along with developing digital technology.

we can easily see so many photos done by digital camera thesedays  and  even too many .

The technology of digital camera has been developed a lot in the way of lighter and easy to access from my experience. so photos have also been closer to reality.

For me, as a person no interested in taking photo, current digital photos are good enough to show something or to mean something.

but there are  people  still looking for a better camera  , which means it is still not enough to mean real world or to mean something special.

it will be interesting to watch how camera technology improve and as a result , how digital photos will be seen in the future.
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We are living on 'digital world', which most of machines are based on digital technology rather than 'analog'.
We are living in a 'digital world', in which most machines are based on digital technology rather than 'analog'.
The correct preposition is in. 


Digital technology has changed totally our life   and the camera is also one of trendy product along with developing digital technology.
Digital technology has totally changed our life  and the camera is also one of trendiest product along with developing digital technology.
rule: one of the + plural noun

we can easily see so many photos done by digital camera thesedays  and  even too many .
We can easily see so many photos done by digital camera these days  and  even too many .
Always capitalize the first letter of your sentence. 
Observe proper spacing. 
We can easily see so many photos done by digital camera these days , and they're even too many .

The technology of digital camera has been developed a lot in the way of lighter and easy to access from my experience. so photos have also been closer to reality.
The technology of digital camera has been developed a lot in a way that it's lighter and easier to access based on my experience, so photos have also been closer to reality.
"In a way" is the correct fixed expression. 
"Easier" to make it parallel to "lighter" - both of which are comparatives. 
"Based on my experience" - "based on" is the correct fixed expression. 

For me, as a person no interested in taking photo, current digital photos are good enough to show something or to mean something.
For me, as a person who's not interested in taking photos, current digital photos are good enough to show something or to mean something.


but there are  people  still looking for a better camera  , which means it is still not enough to mean real world or to mean something special.
However, people are still looking for a better camera , which means it is still not enough in the real world or to mean something special.
Always capitalize the first letter of your sentence. 
Avoid starting your sentence with but in an academic writing, but it's not incorrect as well. You may use "however".

it will be interesting to watch how camera technology improve and as a result , how digital photos will be seen in the future.
It will be interesting to watch how camera technology has improved and as a result , how digital photos will be seen in the future.
Always capitalize the first letter of your sentence. 
The PRESENT PERFECT TENSE is formed with a present tense form of "to have" (has improved) plus the past participle of the verb (which can be either regular or irregular in form). This tense indicates either that an action was completed (finished or "perfected") at some point in the past or that the action extends to the present. 


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