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Women and alcohol



Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is known of its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For healthy and for social reasons, yes I agree, however they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their wealth when they drink too much. Drinking when done in moderation is okay.  


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Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is known of its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For healthy and for social reasons, yes I agree, however they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their wealth when they drink too much. Drinking when done in moderation is okay.  

       Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is
       known for its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For health and for social reasons, yes I agree. 
       However, they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their health
       when they drink too much. Drinking, when done in moderation, is okay.  


      >  "Known for" is an idiomatic expression. 
      >  "Health reason" is the appropriate term to use.
      >  It must be a typographical error. Perhaps you mean "health instead of wealth".
  >  "Drinking is okay" is the main sentence. "When done in moderation" is a condition, thus they should be separated by commas. 


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