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Why I like to write



I like to write because it is my way of expressing my thoughts. It makes me relieve my stress and it gives me sense of focus. It also gives me a kind of satisfaction being able to share my ideas to other people. Writing is a kind of passion I'll continue doing as long as my time would allow me. 


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I like to write because it is my way of expressing my thoughts. It makes me relieve my stress and it gives me sense of focus. It also gives me a kind of satisfaction being able to share my ideas to other people. Writing is a kind of passion I'll continue doing as long as my time would allow me. 

    I like to write because it is my way of expressing my thoughts. It makes me relieve my stress and it gives me
   sense of focus. It also gives me a kind of satisfaction being able to share my ideas with other people.
   Writing  is a kind of passion I'll continue doing as long as my time would allow me. 

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