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The importance of having pets



Many people think pets can be a burden. I use to think of same thing. However, after having my first dog, my perspective change.  Powee became my friend the first time I hold her . She is my source of happiness, and she relieves my stress. Having her is one of the best decision I have ever made.


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Many people think pets can be a burden. I use to think of same thing. However, after having my first dog, my perspective change.  Powee became my friend the first time I hold her . She is my source of happiness, and she relieves my stress. Having her is one of the best decision I have ever made.


       Many people think pets can be a burden. I used to think of the same thing. However, after having my first dog,
      my perspective changed.  Powee became my friend the first time I held her . She is my source of happiness, and
      she relieves my stress. Having her is one of the best decisions I have ever made.

      >  "Used to " is a fixed expression.
      > The article "the" precedes the word "same".
     >  Please be mindful of your tense. Use the past tense "changed and held" to be consistent.
     > "one of the + plural noun"

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